Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response


The preliminary exercise is a brilliant opportunity to learn the basics of filmmaking before creating your actual coursework project.

After the screening of the preliminary exercises in class, you need to create a blogpost called 'Preliminary exercise learner response' and complete the following tasks as your feedback and learner response:

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog.

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and three EBI bullet points (Even Better If) for your preliminary exercise. 
i have displayed some excellent editing and technical skills throughout this preliminary exercise. Good used  of angles and variety of camera shots to establish the match-on-action requirement of the brief.
for my ebi i need to make it look more fantasy and need to cut some of the clips down to try and crate a more and exciting pace to engage the person watching 


3) What have you learned from the preliminary exercise that will help you in the actual coursework project? List three things you have learned or will do differently as a result of this exercise. You may want to comment on organisation, actors, filming, editing or something else entirely but be specific. i would make sure that i take as Meany vids and try to use all off them to make it more fun to watch. I would try and get better at fading out music to make it seem more dramatic. Try to use more them one song 






 WWW:

You have displayed some excellent editing and technical skills throughout this preliminary exercise. Good use of angles and variety of camera shots to establish the match-on-action requirement of the brief. 

EBI:
I think the biggest takeaway from this is ensuring that your project needs to have more conventions of the fantasy genre. If the boy went into the tree and the location was a completely different place - that would signify another world. Also consider the length of your clips as some of them film quite long and you want to excite and engage the audience

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